A lot better without the glasses!
Honestly you have a lot going for you.
I think your eyebrows could be in a more feminine shape, though. I know its a fine line to straddle to have feminine enough brows for when you dress and masculine enough for when you are in male mode, but its doable. I think your eyebrows here read androgynous at best. Your eyebrows actually frame your whole face, which is why I say if nothing else, eyebrows.
I wouldn't line the entire lower lash line. If you are going to line it, I'd stop halfway. You have big eyes, you don't want to close them off! I too have big eyes, and I used to line the lower lash line the whole way. Then I got advice from GGs saying don't, because I have big doe eyes and closing them off will ruin the feature. Check out the pics on my Flickr https://www.flickr.com/photos/thegirldownthehall/ and notice how I line my lower lash line. I generally dust a brown eyeshadow half way, blend it out, and apply a small smudge of brown eyeliner on the outer half of the lash line. It gives it a soft look that defines it without closing it off. Also since you have big eyes, tightlining your lower water line with a white(or light) eye pencil will bring it out and brighten it up even more. I do this, using the NYX Wonder Pencil in Light. Play up your best asset. I would only line your entire lower lash line if you are going with a really dramatic, sultry eye look.
As far as contouring, I wouldn't use a crayon personally, those have a higher learning curve and if you haven't contoured before, can be very unforgiving and heavy because of the blending needed. You need to be good at blending first. I'd go with a powder. I use NYX HD Blush in Taupe for contouring, its cheap and gets the job done. I first apply my bronzer/blush/highlighter, then apply the contour powder on areas I want to contour, generally the hollows of my cheeks, my jawline, my temples, and my nose. Nose is the big one. Your nose, like mine, is masculine and contouring it will make it slimmer and feminine. Contouring is something that takes practice, especially when it comes to blending, but I think its necessary as MTF crossdressers to slim up and demasculinize our faces. Lots of YouTube videos on contouring. Look up contouring for beginners.