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b_mitch0626
02-15-2013, 11:05 AM
I have recently been going through some tough times right now with my self and i dont normally write but this what I came up with let me know what you think please :):)

pink toe, purple nails, yellow bra and panties. yoga pants, leggings skin tight jeans and black heels.
Must be a girl right? Close but not exactly.? A gay man? Far from it! so WHAT is it?

ITS brad! brad?? that's a boy.Correct!! But why? why oh why? I dont know nor do i know why i care and think so much. The looks, thoughts and comments from people hurt. WHY do people care so much? I am not still the same hockey playing person? no people see me as a monster or a sissy.

So why not just stop? Because i cant stop thinking about it, zero self control.

So why you ask again? Because im brad and thats just who i am.:itsok::^5:

outhiking
02-15-2013, 04:33 PM
Hi there and welcome. Nice writing. It's tough to sometimes say how we feel and putting it into writing helps. I'm sure you will find lots of friends on this forum.

Beverley Sims
02-15-2013, 05:48 PM
Edit into poetic lines and it will be great.
I do understand it as is but properly formatted you would do it justice.
I hope the tough times are behind you now.