Hello, Willow! I enjoyed your story very much, and I hope to read more from you in the future. You sound a bit confused, but who isn't? I've been confused all my life, and I envy you because you're young and have lots of time to figure things out, to figure out where you want to go. You sound pretty sharp to me, and I'm sure you'll do things a lot better than I did. I wish you lots of luck.
And, oh, yes, some people have made some remarks about your writing. Do the best you can and don't worry about it, would be my advice. You know, I've got a university degree and have been writing all sorts of stuff for many years, and yet every time I write something, I go back and check my spelling and grammar. I always find corrections to make. And I've never known anyone who wasn't in the same position. So just give us what you've got. You have some good things to say, so please keep at it.
(And you can draw! You've got me there. I can't even draw stick figures.)
Best wishes, Annabelle
